A pendulum called where and whose
Betwixt where and whose
Swings the hit and miss of life,
To win and to lose.
He whose focus’s rife
On where the mistake was made
Goes way far in life
And he who dwells on
By whom was the mistake made
Nary far hast gone.
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Senryu | 15.12.2025 | error, failure, fault, life, loss, success
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