A Pen of Mine

I look for a pen to record a line,
but the pen I find is an inferior design.
Not the pen I wish to use,
to write a line for you to muse,'
or send a love you may refuse.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 1:46 AM
Very witty words Bill.Rgds Brian
Stansfield Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 4:11 PM
I thought this poem was quite quirky and conveyed that you could only use a quality pen for the intended Nice! Paula.
Richards Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 3:09 PM
Your poetry could be written in the sand with a stick, or with a stubby little pencil, and still be quite lovely. How can we resist such beautiful words?? :)
Kendrick Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 2:45 PM
I really like this Rhyme. Sara
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July 27, 2009 at 2:29 PM
When someone uses their pen to convey their feelings, it touches me more deeply than receiving flowers. Don't underestimate the power of YOUR pen, Bill. It carries a powerful message. Very nice poem! Love, Carolyn
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