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A Pen of Mine

I look for a pen to record a line, but the pen I find is an inferior design. Not the pen I wish to use, to write a line for you to muse,' or send a love you may refuse.

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Brian Strand

Date: 7/28/2009 1:46:00 AM

Very witty words Bill.Rgds Brian

Paula Stansfield

Date: 7/27/2009 4:11:00 PM

I thought this poem was quite quirky and conveyed that you could only use a quality pen for the intended Nice! Paula.

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/27/2009 3:09:00 PM

Your poetry could be written in the sand with a stick, or with a stubby little pencil, and still be quite lovely. How can we resist such beautiful words?? :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/27/2009 2:45:00 PM

I really like this Rhyme. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/27/2009 2:29:00 PM

When someone uses their pen to convey their feelings, it touches me more deeply than receiving flowers. Don't underestimate the power of YOUR pen, Bill. It carries a powerful message. Very nice poem! Love, Carolyn