A Path Un Traveled ( Part 4 )

Vultures surround me, glaring at my ebony“ unsaved Soul“, Squawking, waiting for the
“Feast of Death”
The Sallow Sky envelopes me, destroying  all thoughts of  Eternity , a Love tear falls with-in 
my last Breath
Where are the Stars, the Moon, the Sun, LIFE? : I stand alone  scarred and scared ; “I want 
to go Home” 
See the glory of Mother Nature, touch the Robe of Father Time : To Write myself out of this 
Horrible Poem

Inspired By the POEM  “  If you can’t be a poet, be the POEM “  By Dr. Ram Mehta
Dedicated To  “ Dr. Ram Mehta “ ( My Literary Advisor) through His Comments to my Work
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smalling Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 6:27 AM
HG ... we just open our hands and let it go, what we see not invisible in our grasp, will fly to become, and become is always becoming ... so we write them, brother.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 3:55 PM
SOUP MAIL...URGENT ..luv..
Oimbo Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 8:00 AM
this poems strikes almost because of it strange form.tell me, are you experimenting with the structure?
Peranteau Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 5:13 AM
...the horror would be for you to back out of this; what started to be a captivating write ! As the pulse becomes rappid, the writer feels that his write is vapip.. tasteless...but it's not, just when you threw in the last canto. Thanks for the fun ! much love, james
Mehta Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 6:54 AM
Thanks for the compliments, HG. Nice expressions ... see the glory of Mother Nature, touch the Robe of Father Time
Onclaud Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 10:42 PM
Broodingly beautiful with solid imagery.. thanks for sahring! warmest, nette
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