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A Passed Note

a passed note do you like me or not my paper heart 5/23/12

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/14/2012 12:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Simple Poems" contest Susan. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 6/13/2012 7:43:00 AM

Susan congrats on your win..David

Joseph May

Date: 6/13/2012 7:21:00 AM

congrats on your win Susan...

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/12/2012 11:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your great win!!! Terry

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/12/2012 9:21:00 AM

HA,,, HOW DID i miss this one,, Hi Susan.. A wonderful congratulations with your awesome deep poem,... God bless~ XOX*PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2012 8:11:00 PM

Susan , this is an excellent senryu! Where are you lately? Haven't heard from you lately.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2012 7:52:00 AM

Lovely heart.....like you a lot B.E.S. ....lol... - oxox Anne-Lise

Kathryn Collins

Date: 6/6/2012 12:52:00 PM

Susan - Such a treat in three little lines.

Ivy Vresk

Date: 6/4/2012 1:04:00 PM

short yet strong,love it,Ivy

Jack Horne

Date: 6/4/2012 8:12:00 AM

lol, I love this straight to the point approach, Susan

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/3/2012 5:31:00 AM

Love it!!! The sweet memories you brought back..all smiles.

Nathan D.

Date: 6/2/2012 10:29:00 PM

i would like it if you'd pay attention to me. :-) lol! right back at you Susan...... Keep your short form style, I like it or why else would i come back here. now go host a limerick contest, join me & PD. She's really convincing. I' can't accept the paper heart, without ripping it' Senryu is cute' and my avatar is cute' I'll change it soon'

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/2/2012 7:33:00 PM

This is a wonderful, extraordinary write my friend! You have written a lovely poem...you speak exactly the way we were in grammar school! Thanks for bringing up pleasant memories! Great Work!!

Richard Palmer

Date: 6/2/2012 6:58:00 PM

I like you lol lol especially for your great mind xoxoxo