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A Passed Note

a passed note
do you like me or not
my paper heart


5/23/12

fearhopelovesenryu

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 14, 2012 at 12:31 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Simple Poems" contest Susan. Love, Carol

David Williams

June 13, 2012 at 7:43 AM

Susan congrats on your win..David

Joseph May

June 13, 2012 at 7:21 AM

congrats on your win Susan...

Terry O'Leary

June 12, 2012 at 11:26 AM

Congratulations on your great win!!! Terry

Poet Destroyer A

June 12, 2012 at 9:21 AM

HA,,, HOW DID i miss this one,, Hi Susan.. A wonderful congratulations with your awesome deep poem,... God bless~ XOX*PD

Andrea Dietrich

June 9, 2012 at 8:11 PM

Susan , this is an excellent senryu! Where are you lately? Haven't heard from you lately.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 7, 2012 at 7:52 AM

Lovely heart.....like you a lot B.E.S. ....lol... - oxox Anne-Lise

Kathryn Collins

June 6, 2012 at 12:52 PM

Susan - Such a treat in three little lines.

Ivy Vresk

June 4, 2012 at 1:04 PM

short yet strong,love it,Ivy

Jack Horne

June 4, 2012 at 8:12 AM

lol, I love this straight to the point approach, Susan

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 3, 2012 at 5:31 AM

Love it!!! The sweet memories you brought back..all smiles.

Nathan D.

June 2, 2012 at 10:29 PM

i would like it if you'd pay attention to me. :-) lol! right back at you Susan...... Keep your short form style, I like it or why else would i come back here. now go host a limerick contest, join me & PD. She's really convincing. I' can't accept the paper heart, without ripping it' Senryu is cute' and my avatar is cute' I'll change it soon'

Russell Sivey

June 2, 2012 at 7:33 PM

This is a wonderful, extraordinary write my friend! You have written a lovely poem...you speak exactly the way we were in grammar school! Thanks for bringing up pleasant memories! Great Work!!