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A Park Bench In Heaven

(L)ove

(I)s

(F)or

(E)ternity





~~A co-creation with my girlfriend ~~

allusioncelebrationtruthacrostic

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Andrea Dietrich

November 6, 2019 at 7:30 PM

I love how you extended life into heaven, Keith!

Keith O.J. Hunt

November 10, 2019 at 12:39 PM

Many thanks Andrea, glad you strolled the heavens;-)

James Inman

July 28, 2019 at 2:52 PM

Very cool acrostic Keith.

Matthew Anish

September 3, 2018 at 11:04 AM

Sounds like you have a nice thing going! Peace & Blesings Matthew Anish

Darlene De Beaulieu

April 27, 2018 at 12:40 PM

Hello Keith, I so agree with your poem.It says it all. Have a nice day my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong

April 12, 2018 at 2:38 PM

How lovely you have a French girlfriend to collaborate with Keith. You can both learn from each other. This is magnifique! : )

Matthew Anish

April 10, 2018 at 7:53 PM

Nice to have a girlfriend to collaborate with! Nice poem- very clever. Met someone new the other day. Hope springs eternal!! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Caren Krutsinger

April 10, 2018 at 1:39 AM

I am honored by your soul honoring your girlfriend as she honors you. GREAT!

Pashang Salehi

April 3, 2018 at 2:46 AM

Light is love, love is warm, If you have it trust the storm.

Jan Allison

April 2, 2018 at 11:59 AM

what a fabulous collaboration Keith , I hope all the comments inspires her to join soup too:-) Happy Easter to you both:-) hugs Jan xx

Keith O.J. Hunt

April 4, 2018 at 5:43 AM

Thanks Jan, but my girl's first language is French, she tried, just not her thing;-)

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 1, 2018 at 2:33 PM

Love is eternity for love is God and God is love my friend, Keith! Well written! Happy Easter!

Keith O.J. Hunt

April 4, 2018 at 5:40 AM

Thanks Demetrios;-)

Kai Michael Neumann

April 1, 2018 at 4:12 AM

Love rocks and is the answer to all questions. Many wishes, Kai

Keith O.J. Hunt

April 4, 2018 at 5:40 AM

Thanks Kai;-)

Robert Lindley

March 31, 2018 at 2:05 PM

Keep on writing my friend. Love is meant to be a sustained and never ending feeling/connection. That such oft is not so is because man is a fallen creature that walks in blindness and this dark, evil world. Sharing with her your writing is a great and wise act my friend...

Nette Onclaud

March 30, 2018 at 6:56 AM

keith, no wonder you are the resurrected apollo!...what a divine write!... huggs

Keith O.J. Hunt

March 30, 2018 at 9:25 AM

Ahh...shuck'ems, thanks nette, Happy Easter sister;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 28, 2018 at 7:44 AM

...... soooo sweeeet :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Keith O.J. Hunt

March 29, 2018 at 2:54 AM

Not as sweet as you Sunshine;-) Many hugs back

Vijay Pandit

March 28, 2018 at 7:07 AM

Love and life together..a piece of art..kudos to you Keith and your girlfriend for creativity!

Keith O.J. Hunt

March 29, 2018 at 2:53 AM

Glad you enjoyed Vijay;-)

Silent One

March 28, 2018 at 6:32 AM

very sweet...

Keith O.J. Hunt

March 29, 2018 at 2:52 AM

Thanks friend;-)

Susan Ashley

March 27, 2018 at 6:30 PM

Keith, I just love the beautifully spiritual message in your poem co-created with your girlfriend. Simply splendid and I love love love your title as well. A special, deep and lovely poem. Warmest wishes my friend and Happy Easter! ~Susan

Keith O.J. Hunt

March 29, 2018 at 2:52 AM

Thanks Susan, happy Easter to you too;-)

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