A Park Bench In Heaven

(L)ove

(I)s

(F)or

(E)ternity





~~A co-creation with my girlfriend ~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/6/2019 7:30:00 PM
I love how you extended life into heaven, Keith!
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 11/10/2019 12:39:00 PM
Many thanks Andrea, glad you strolled the heavens;-)
Date: 7/28/2019 2:52:00 PM
Very cool acrostic Keith.
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Date: 9/3/2018 11:04:00 AM
Sounds like you have a nice thing going! Peace & Blesings Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/27/2018 12:40:00 PM
Hello Keith, I so agree with your poem.It says it all. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 4/12/2018 2:38:00 PM
How lovely you have a French girlfriend to collaborate with Keith. You can both learn from each other. This is magnifique! : )
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Date: 4/10/2018 7:53:00 PM
Nice to have a girlfriend to collaborate with! Nice poem- very clever. Met someone new the other day. Hope springs eternal!! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/10/2018 1:39:00 AM
I am honored by your soul honoring your girlfriend as she honors you. GREAT!
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Date: 4/3/2018 2:46:00 AM
Light is love, love is warm, If you have it trust the storm.
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Date: 4/2/2018 11:59:00 AM
what a fabulous collaboration Keith , I hope all the comments inspires her to join soup too:-) Happy Easter to you both:-) hugs Jan xx
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 4/4/2018 5:43:00 AM
Thanks Jan, but my girl's first language is French, she tried, just not her thing;-)
Date: 4/1/2018 2:33:00 PM
Love is eternity for love is God and God is love my friend, Keith! Well written! Happy Easter!
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 4/4/2018 5:40:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios;-)
Date: 4/1/2018 4:12:00 AM
Love rocks and is the answer to all questions. Many wishes, Kai
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 4/4/2018 5:40:00 AM
Thanks Kai;-)
Date: 3/31/2018 2:05:00 PM
Keep on writing my friend. Love is meant to be a sustained and never ending feeling/connection. That such oft is not so is because man is a fallen creature that walks in blindness and this dark, evil world. Sharing with her your writing is a great and wise act my friend...
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Date: 3/30/2018 6:56:00 AM
keith, no wonder you are the resurrected apollo!...what a divine write!... huggs
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/30/2018 9:25:00 AM
Ahh...shuck'ems, thanks nette, Happy Easter sister;-)
Date: 3/28/2018 7:44:00 AM
...... soooo sweeeet :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/29/2018 2:54:00 AM
Not as sweet as you Sunshine;-) Many hugs back
Date: 3/28/2018 7:07:00 AM
Love and life together..a piece of art..kudos to you Keith and your girlfriend for creativity!
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/29/2018 2:53:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed Vijay;-)
Date: 3/28/2018 6:32:00 AM
very sweet...
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/29/2018 2:52:00 AM
Thanks friend;-)
Date: 3/27/2018 6:30:00 PM
Keith, I just love the beautifully spiritual message in your poem co-created with your girlfriend. Simply splendid and I love love love your title as well. A special, deep and lovely poem. Warmest wishes my friend and Happy Easter! ~Susan
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Date: 3/29/2018 2:52:00 AM
Thanks Susan, happy Easter to you too;-)
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