A Parents Loss

Baby Precious, cute. Crying, laughing, smiling. Crawl, tumble, walk, trip. Growing, exploring, leaving. Sad, dark gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 10:52 PM
Ahhh, the baby became sad. Or maybe it was the parents sad! In any event, a passage of life. and you showed it wonderfully!
Deane Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 9:12 AM
The simplest of words can sometimes paint the biggest of pictures...lovely write...luv shannon
Cooper Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 2:52 PM
that pretty much sums it up my friend, you only have your child for a while then they grow up and leave.... if you're lucky they may call again.
Falotico Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 6:50 AM
I love what you did with the form... sad but I guess its life... luv Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
November 20, 2011 at 8:15 PM
very well expressed cory...so full of emotion..good luck in the contest.. my right hand is in a cast from finger surgery last week so have not been on PS ..need to rest and not type but am sneaking tonight..so hubby does not catch me ..haha..hope u are fine buddy...luv..
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