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A Parable of Pretence

lies and excuses await: narcissism sees itself... no one else exists: ego emits pre-occupation- admits nothing up close myopia passes by without seeing the obvious...

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/23/2017 10:23:00 AM

Sharp pen :)

Brian Strand
Date: 9/23/2017 10:36:00 AM

Indeed,thanks Maureen

Jan Allison

Date: 9/23/2017 5:38:00 AM

Bravo Brian!:-) hugs jan xx

Brian Strand
Date: 9/23/2017 6:08:00 AM

Thanks Jan,have a good weekend

Ricky Muse

Date: 9/23/2017 3:24:00 AM

Personification at it's finest. Really like the line "myopia passes by without seeing the obvious". Thanks for sharing...........peace!

Brian Strand
Date: 9/23/2017 3:56:00 AM

Thanks Richard,have a good weekend