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A Pancake Moon

I tossed my pancake Right into the sky I looked up and saw It stuck to the night A perfect round Done just right Glowing with syrup As it perked me up! It tempted me alright Have you ever tried Tossing your pancake Into the open sky It inched closer to me As it grew very fat I held out my plate And it dropped Just like that! 13.10.2021 Sponsor: Eve Roper Contest: Nursery Rhyme

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/14/2021 10:12:00 AM

Hello, Carol, I really liked your poem, but I couldn't place it in the contest. You forgot to place Nursery Rhyme at the end of your title . Sure loved your verse. Hugs

Carol Mitra
Date: 10/14/2021 11:18:00 PM

Hi Eve....I have mentioned Nursery Rhyme at the bottom of the poem....I am glad you liked it.... Doesn't matter if it was not placed....Much love :)