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A Pancake Moon

I tossed my pancake
Right into the sky
I looked up and saw
It stuck to the night
A perfect round
Done just right
Glowing with syrup
As it perked me up!
It tempted me alright
Have you ever tried
Tossing your pancake
Into the open sky
It inched closer to me
As it grew very fat
I held out my plate
And it dropped 
Just like that!

13.10.2021
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Contest: Nursery Rhyme

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/14/2021 10:12:00 AM

Hello, Carol, I really liked your poem, but I couldn't place it in the contest. You forgot to place Nursery Rhyme at the end of your title . Sure loved your verse. Hugs

Carol Mitra
Date: 10/14/2021 11:18:00 PM

Hi Eve....I have mentioned Nursery Rhyme at the bottom of the poem....I am glad you liked it.... Doesn't matter if it was not placed....Much love :)