A One On One

What
is poetry
          is it me
          with thee
upon this page
sharing
               a moment
               of mine,
now a moment
of thine
           co-joined
           unspoken
yet real
somewhat 
surreal          yet
        for a while
here
understood
                  peer to
peer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 9:49 PM
GREAT title too (I had not even paid attention to that at first)
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 9:48 PM
I really like that: peer to peer. Also the surreal line. Somewhat surreal to go with the real. Very cool, Brian.
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