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A Ocean Alouette

A dark blue ocean always in motion will sparkle in the sunlight casting disks of gold that each wave must hold until lost on sands of white foam flecked water churns grabs sand as it turns retreating back when it's done once again to hold those bright disks of gold soon lost to a setting sun
For the contest "A Lovely Alouette"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/15/2014 3:56:00 PM
YOur poem, LInda, was one of the most creative ones for symbolism. I really liked that about your poem and I love oceans. wish you had said AN ocean. If you visit my blog, I am showing there a poem that used the meter of this form. I really did not explain it well enough in my contest page. Anyway, love your poem. Congrats.
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Date: 9/15/2014 1:51:00 PM
Very beautiful Linda. I love water so much and I could see the picture as I read this lovely poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/15/2014 1:28:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations it is a joy to read this again:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/15/2014 7:18:00 AM
I agree with Jan, what wonderful imagery in this Alouette Linda. Big congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/31/2014 2:06:00 PM
Stunning imagery I think Andrea will love this :-) Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xx
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