A Notice Arrives

time wings on by
    we forget to say hi
  a notice arrives
    non-verbal goodbye

  tears well up now...
    we still recall how
  to point a finger at fate
    tho it's us who's too late
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Tor Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 8:16 AM
We are neglectful creatures my friend you have expressed it well...
Wolf Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 6:10 PM
Don't wait too long, my friend. Reach out and touch...
Hawkins Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 12:14 AM
As we age we are more conscious of time and realise that is something we have no control over.
Wolf Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 6:11 PM
No control over time... but we should do our best with what we have...
Romios Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 3:46 PM
Ouch! It’s very easy to forget people these days, especially in the age of the Internet. Or we are frigid to their feelings, and just walk all over them.Or we ignore them. And one day, we find that they’re gone. And the feelings of remorse and sadness set in.too late to say I am sorry. Appreciate the living all you can and remember they have hearts, and they’re not to be walked over. Panagiota Pangie
Romios Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 5:27 PM
I am no angel either. And reach out first to those you care about. The others, can wait…in my life,I have put off contacting people and then, it was too late. Being older, I know my time is limited, but I do the best I can. Any day could be my last. Not one person should assume that tomorrow they will be alive to.. Panagiota
Wolf Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 4:02 PM
As insightful a comment as I've received this month, for which I thank you, my good friend... May we redouble our efforts to reach out while we can do so -- and our loved ones are still within reach! ~ No angel am I
Sands Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 5:04 AM
Sad and to the point. Important to think about, Gershon :)
Wolf Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 4:02 PM
Thank you, Heidi. 100% right you are! Here's reaching out and touching you! :) gw
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