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A Note On the Wind I Followed

One day, having no cares, as I walked along my mind was like a slate needing written upon, for no words had I – not even a song. Any thoughts coming to me were just as soon gone. Soon enough there came as if out of nowhere a sound! A note on the wind I followed. One note – long and lovely – piercing the air. It led to the woods, in whose sounds it got swallowed. The note I had followed for a short time became the woods’ murmurs so calming to me. I stopped and sat down and thought up a rhyme. The wind led me where to write poetry! Oct. 25, 2022 A Rhymed poem for A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest (not for the free verse contest of similar title)

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Date: 10/25/2022 12:22:00 PM
Amazing what a sound can do...a tweet, a beep, a bark...or just a note on the wind. Lovely write, Andrea. I was almost afraid to read thinking it was for my contest...but I knew better of you :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/25/2022 12:58:00 PM
well, originally it was FOR your contest (until I saw I did not read your directions carefully enough), so then I had to redo it in free verse, to be posted later on!!
Date: 10/25/2022 10:30:00 AM
Wonderful title, Andrea. I live the rhyme and flow of the poem.
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Date: 10/25/2022 10:11:00 AM
I love how your lyrical words have me swaying as if to music.
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Date: 10/25/2022 7:40:00 AM
Andrea, you have portrayed it in a most lyrical way. Your inspiration led you outside, where you found what nature never fails to offer. Your poetry was enjoyable to read. Good luck with the contest
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Date: 10/25/2022 7:33:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, This was well-written and very poetic. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/25/2022 7:23:00 AM
A lovely peaceful poem in the woods!! Really enjoyed Andrea! Debx
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Date: 10/25/2022 7:14:00 AM
Very original, Andrea. Good to recover the paper and write a verse. Hugs.
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Date: 10/25/2022 5:51:00 AM
Wonderfully poetic rendering, Andrea. Your muse invited you to nature--and nature always delivers. Enjoyed your poem.
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