A Note of Friendship

Green was the colour of your shirt at school park,
Where we used to fly and run and sit at,
Cyan was the colour of the hero of the Marvels,
Whose name I used to annoyingly call.
Isn't it just so preety to think,
All along there was some
INVISIBLE STRINGS,
Tying you to me.
Red was the anger of the boy of our class,
Whom we used to laugh at,
And whom we admire.
Cool was the lyric of the song of that film,
Which we chose chemistery class to sing at,
You said I sound like a american singer.
Time ,
Mystical time,
Cutting me open and healing me fine,
Were there clues??
I didn't see...
But isn't it just so preety to think,
All along there was some
INVISIBLE STRINGS,
Tying you to me....


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Date: 11/23/2023 11:08:00 PM
Curie, i so so like this one! Suoer flow. Giid barrative & related use if dialog 2nd hand to imagine. Wonderful, Tossing roses at your feet
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Curie Stark
Date: 12/16/2023 12:55:00 AM
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Date: 8/18/2023 3:06:00 PM
I am guessing you did not mean to enter this into my contest about school bus safety messages???? However, you did a really good job for a topic completely different than safety messages! Anyways have a great day. Miranda
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Curie Stark
Date: 8/19/2023 3:10:00 AM
This poem is reminiscent of easy back to home in bits with my friends. So I thought it would be great nostalgic read for you too. Glad you liked it
Date: 8/9/2022 5:46:00 AM
"INVISIBLE STRINGS" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Curie Stark
Date: 8/27/2022 3:20:00 AM
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Date: 8/8/2022 9:45:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, poetically celebrating "International Friendship Day." God bless you.
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Curie Stark
Date: 8/27/2022 3:21:00 AM
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Date: 11/10/2020 7:06:00 PM
Ingenious use of 'invisible strings,' Curie. Welcome to Poetry Soup... Write on, please! Thank you, Gershon
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Curie Stark
Date: 5/13/2021 3:54:00 AM
Thanks for your appreciations.
Date: 10/23/2020 11:19:00 PM
Curie, what a nice nostalgic look back at the beginnings of a friendship and shared experiences that bind friends together. ~Mark
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Curie Stark
Date: 10/24/2020 1:28:00 AM
Remeniscing, you know, makes poems magical
Date: 10/13/2020 7:05:00 AM
the last lines are brilliant.. what a way to think about being attacked to someone... brilliant!
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Date: 8/27/2022 3:21:00 AM
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