A Note of Friendship

Green was the colour of your shirt at school park,
Where we used to fly and run and sit at,
Cyan was the colour of the hero of the Marvels,
Whose name I used to annoyingly call.
Isn't it just so preety to think,
All along there was some
INVISIBLE STRINGS,
Tying you to me.
Red was the anger of the boy of our class,
Whom we used to laugh at,
And whom we admire.
Cool was the lyric of the song of that film,
Which we chose chemistery class to sing at,
You said I sound like a american singer.
Time ,
Mystical time,
Cutting me open and healing me fine,
Were there clues??
I didn't see...
But isn't it just so preety to think,
All along there was some
INVISIBLE STRINGS,
Tying you to me....


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Eslinger Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 11:08 PM
Curie, i so so like this one! Suoer flow. Giid barrative & related use if dialog 2nd hand to imagine. Wonderful, Tossing roses at your feet
Stark Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 12:55 AM
Thanks
Hawley Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 3:06 PM
I am guessing you did not mean to enter this into my contest about school bus safety messages???? However, you did a really good job for a topic completely different than safety messages! Anyways have a great day. Miranda
Stark Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 3:10 AM
This poem is reminiscent of easy back to home in bits with my friends. So I thought it would be great nostalgic read for you too. Glad you liked it
Alex Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 5:46 AM
"INVISIBLE STRINGS" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Stark Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 3:20 AM
Thanks
Agustin Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 9:45 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, poetically celebrating "International Friendship Day." God bless you.
Stark Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 3:21 AM
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Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 7:06 PM
Ingenious use of 'invisible strings,' Curie. Welcome to Poetry Soup... Write on, please! Thank you, Gershon
Stark Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 3:54 AM
Thanks for your appreciations.
Toney Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 11:19 PM
Curie, what a nice nostalgic look back at the beginnings of a friendship and shared experiences that bind friends together. ~Mark
Stark Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 1:28 AM
Remeniscing, you know, makes poems magical
One Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 7:05 AM
the last lines are brilliant.. what a way to think about being attacked to someone... brilliant!
Stark Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 3:21 AM
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