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A Note From My Elderly Shoe

"One day while resting in the store,
I saw you striding through the door.
You seemed a kindly youngster who
Would know just how to treat a shoe.
Though nervous, newly-made, and shy,
I tried my best to catch your eye.
And soon my heart was filled with glee.
You picked me up and purchased me!

"You took me home and shined me up
And kept me from your gnawing pup.
Beneath your bed you made me wait
Beside the one you called my mate.
I sat forgotten there for weeks
With dusty toys and dirty sneaks.
Until, at last, one day at dawn
You picked me up and put me on.

"For months I took you where you chose.
I saved your sole and heel and toes.
We dodged the mud and sidewalk cracks
And walked on walls and railroad tracks.
You put your weight and trust on me
And laced me tightly as can be.
Through pain and sweaty feet and rain
I held my tongue, did not complain.

But now I'm old; there is no doubt.
I'm tattered, torn, and all worn out.
I hear you've bought a brand new pair.
With all I've done, it isn't fair.
Remember how we romped and ran?
I need a good retirement plan.
I've earned a better ending than
The bottom of your garbage can."

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(Did you notice the two shoe puns? 
     "I saved your sole(soul"
      and "held my tongue")
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Goldsmith Avatar
April 21, 2023 at 11:19 AM
This is a creative write. Love It. I wish you would write more. Have a fun day writing away..................
Ryder Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 9:26 AM
Just delightful - with good scans and rhymes and narrative.
Rutherford Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 8:56 AM
Richard ,a witty and funny poem, made me smile Anne
Thompson Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 2:12 PM
This poem was obviously a walk in the park for you! Brilliantly written. Thoroughly enjoyed the read...Ron
Thomas Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 5:29 PM
Thank you very much for reading this and very kind compliment
Theraven Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 9:17 AM
Richard, I like this poem. Was it the right shoe you left? -Richard
Thomas Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 9:28 AM
Thank you. Your right/left line is clever. Wish I had thought of it when writing the poem.
Sands Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 1:24 PM
Great one Richard! :)
Thomas Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 4:49 PM
Thank you for taking time to comment.
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