A Note At the End

Dear stranger 
even though you 
let me go,
My heart and 
soul will still 
be with you,
I'm sorry it had 
to end this way,
But my life 
could not go no 
other way,
Sometime's i 
think if i could 
have just seen your 
face, Everything 
would have been 
ok, But sometimes it 
just don't work 
out that way,
Now i must go this 
pain is to much,
I guess this is 
the end of our,
Fatal love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Burton Avatar
July 31, 2008 at 11:01 PM
deep as it should be.really enjoyed it will read more
Brown Avatar
July 10, 2008 at 6:05 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Joanie. I hope you will continue to write and share your excellent poetry with us. Love, Carol
George Avatar
June 13, 2008 at 6:17 PM
almost everyone of my friends have tried to commit suicide and some have suceeded and it's all because they claim no one loves them... I thank you for this peom because it shows how much the simplist way of action can change someone's life in either a good way or bad, the simple action that plays a big role in everyone's life...the action of love
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