A Nightmare

The other night I dreamed of spiraling downward,
But the earth delayed rising up to receive me.
I watched my unending fall into masses of despair
Falling rapidly, I found that I could not flee;
I could only hope that “better angels” would prevail,
That I would be spared this ultimate catastrophe.

The sudden dashing of my bones and blood
Into the seething cauldron of anger at the barricades,
I became embedded with the riff-raff insurrectionists
[For those two hours of storming the palisades]
Who were not impetuous youths or young idealists,
But malcontents gathered from all types and trades.

When I awakened I found myself suspended in limbo
Not discerning where I had been or what it could mean,
Until I recognized the statue of Lady Liberty atop
The shining golden dome that rises from the green;
Realizing how awfully close, like democracy, I had come
To disappearing into the disastrous and never again seen.

Revised and Edited March 31, 2021
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sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann

September 23, 2022
Submitted to: "One from the Dark Side" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: John Lawless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 1/9/2021 2:25:00 PM
Your poem stirs up so much patriotism in me,it feels amazing!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/9/2021 6:09:00 PM
Thank you, Caren. I appreciate your feelings. Thanks for reading my poem.
Date: 1/9/2021 1:43:00 PM
- "But malcontents gathered from all types and trades" ... excellent described ... a real nightmare ... and I think more will come - // Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/9/2021 2:03:00 PM
Oh my, I hope not! But, I suspect we will see some nightmarish events on inauguration day. Thanks for your comment. Thanks for reading my work.
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