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A Nightingale Sings of Dawn's Glory

Dear Poetic Bird! Move lean, wide, fly to the sky.
With every tune and sound, you adorn the moon.
The sun is rising, and assumptions are shying away.

Love is dawning, so dance, cheer, and replay!
Wonderful nightingale! Enthralling with the croon.
Dear Poetic Bird! Move lean, wide, fly to the sky.

Flowing at night, while the trees are ghastly dry.
To offer mental relief to the lover by filling a ray of tune.
The sun is rising, and assumptions are shying away.

She yelled out her song, and then her sweetheart cry.
For every single person, love is lost too soon.
Dear Poetic Bird! Move lean, wide, fly to the sky.

To discover a rose,  the nightingale veered every way.
She brought feathery wings to the rose festoon.
The sun is rising, and assumptions are shying away.

Sending a white rose would permit me to sing every day.
But that is the only red rose, and everything else is ruin.
Dear Poetic Bird! Move lean, wide, fly to the sky.
The sun is rising, and assumptions are shying away.




Written: May 17, 2021

This Or That, Vol 3 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
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Ibeh Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 12:19 PM
Marvelous poem as always, Lasaad:-) It has really wonderful imagery throughout! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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June 18, 2021 at 10:56 AM
Beautiful sights and sounds--so well crafted poem! BIG congrats on your win, Lasaad.
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June 18, 2021 at 11:33 AM
Thanks so much for your insightful, thoughtful comment on my poem, Vijay. It is always delightful to get your kind words. My best to you, friend
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June 18, 2021 at 9:38 AM
It’s a beautiful Villanelle poem you have written Lasaad. “Wonderful nightingale! Enthralling with the croon” a lovely outstanding line. Congratulations on a well deserved win… Belle
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June 18, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Thanks so much, dear Belle. Your insightful thoughtful comment on my poem is always delightful. My best to you, friend.
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June 18, 2021 at 9:31 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write and picture. Enjoy your win with blessings...................
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June 18, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Thank you so much, Paula. I'm delighted with your kind words: blessing and best regards.
Alex Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 7:28 AM
Great. Congratulations!
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June 18, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Thanks, Alex, I appreciate your congratulations
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May 19, 2021 at 7:43 AM
Heart warming beauty overflowing your poetic pen! Cheerful and lovely scenic views genuinely portrayed! You have composed your very Villanelle full of artistry and musicality! A great pleasure to read your beautiful poetry Lasaad! Wishing you the best of luck in the contest.. My deepest regards and blessings.
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May 19, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Much thanks dear sister Basma, for your great remark and visit to my page, I have been feeling the loss of your awesome sonnets, Have a brilliant day, and my best respects
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May 19, 2021 at 7:36 AM
An enchanting poem with mesmerizing imagery, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Good luck! Blessings.
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May 19, 2021 at 8:49 AM
Thanks, dear Demetrios, your visit is always supportive, blessings and best regards
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 11:58 AM
wonderful imagery, Lasaad. This is not an easy form to do either!!
Poet Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 12:19 PM
Thanks, Andrea, your comment is so much appreciated.
Cunningham Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Love the imagery Lasaad, a beautiful sound to start the day. Good luck in the contest and hope your week is going well. Tom
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May 18, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Thanks, Tom, your comment was really supportive, and I appreciate your kind and beautiful words, blessings, and best regards
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May 18, 2021 at 2:02 AM
You hit the jackpot with this poem. Great verse. Best for a win.
Poet Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 3:30 AM
Thank you so much, Victor, for the kind words, blessings and have a great day
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