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Dear Poetic Bird! Move lean, wide, fly to the sky. With every tune and sound, you adorn the moon. The sun is rising, and assumptions are shying away. Love is dawning, so dance, cheer, and replay! Wonderful nightingale! Enthralling with the croon. Dear Poetic Bird! Move lean, wide, fly to the sky. Flowing at night, while the trees are ghastly dry. To offer mental relief to the lover by filling a ray of tune. The sun is rising, and assumptions are shying away. She yelled out her song, and then her sweetheart cry. For every single person, love is lost too soon. Dear Poetic Bird! Move lean, wide, fly to the sky. To discover a rose,  the nightingale veered every way. She brought feathery wings to the rose festoon. The sun is rising, and assumptions are shying away. Sending a white rose would permit me to sing every day. But that is the only red rose, and everything else is ruin. Dear Poetic Bird! Move lean, wide, fly to the sky. The sun is rising, and assumptions are shying away. Written: May 17, 2021 This Or That, Vol 3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 6/18/2021 12:19:00 PM
Marvelous poem as always, Lasaad:-) It has really wonderful imagery throughout! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 6/18/2021 10:56:00 AM
Beautiful sights and sounds--so well crafted poem! BIG congrats on your win, Lasaad.
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Date: 6/18/2021 11:33:00 AM
Thanks so much for your insightful, thoughtful comment on my poem, Vijay. It is always delightful to get your kind words. My best to you, friend
Date: 6/18/2021 9:38:00 AM
It’s a beautiful Villanelle poem you have written Lasaad. “Wonderful nightingale! Enthralling with the croon” a lovely outstanding line. Congratulations on a well deserved win… Belle
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Date: 6/18/2021 11:37:00 AM
Thanks so much, dear Belle. Your insightful thoughtful comment on my poem is always delightful. My best to you, friend.
Date: 6/18/2021 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write and picture. Enjoy your win with blessings...................
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Date: 6/18/2021 11:42:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paula. I'm delighted with your kind words: blessing and best regards.
Date: 6/18/2021 7:28:00 AM
Great. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/18/2021 8:16:00 AM
Thanks, Alex, I appreciate your congratulations
Date: 5/19/2021 7:43:00 AM
Heart warming beauty overflowing your poetic pen! Cheerful and lovely scenic views genuinely portrayed! You have composed your very Villanelle full of artistry and musicality! A great pleasure to read your beautiful poetry Lasaad! Wishing you the best of luck in the contest.. My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 5/19/2021 8:57:00 AM
Much thanks dear sister Basma, for your great remark and visit to my page, I have been feeling the loss of your awesome sonnets, Have a brilliant day, and my best respects
Date: 5/19/2021 7:36:00 AM
An enchanting poem with mesmerizing imagery, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Good luck! Blessings.
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Date: 5/19/2021 8:49:00 AM
Thanks, dear Demetrios, your visit is always supportive, blessings and best regards
Date: 5/18/2021 11:58:00 AM
wonderful imagery, Lasaad. This is not an easy form to do either!!
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Date: 5/18/2021 12:19:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, your comment is so much appreciated.
Date: 5/18/2021 8:23:00 AM
Love the imagery Lasaad, a beautiful sound to start the day. Good luck in the contest and hope your week is going well. Tom
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Date: 5/18/2021 11:07:00 AM
Thanks, Tom, your comment was really supportive, and I appreciate your kind and beautiful words, blessings, and best regards
Date: 5/18/2021 2:02:00 AM
You hit the jackpot with this poem. Great verse. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/18/2021 3:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Victor, for the kind words, blessings and have a great day

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