A Night To Remember

A dance to foretell
of love's lasting kiss.
I know him not well
and hope more than this.
A touch of his hand,
my vantage, a dream,
the ballroom is grand
in splendorous gleam!

The music plays loud -
a Viennese waltz.
Notes blend with the crowd
in boisterous vaults,
and Sirius shows
more bright than before.
The night's starry glow
warms me to my core.

Toasts, cheers and laughter -
merriment galore!
Champagne sips after
each spin on the floor.
My dance card is filled,
but all my eyes see -
strong man with tall build,
how handsome is he!

With touch of his cheek
and twinkling brown eyes,
more words do I seek
than polite replies.
Then, when dance is done
and night stops to rest,
my head will have won
a place on his chest.

One familiar glance,
vows exchanged in June,
all from a first dance
that ended too soon.


for Isaiah Zerbst's Ballroom Delight Contest, 11/16/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 26, 2014 at 9:33 PM
RHONDA, A beautiful and wonderful Ballroom Delight. Congrats on your win :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Taylor Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 2:43 PM
Aaah, like it - simplicity but says a lot within I think
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 9:46 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Rhonda! Beautiful and so romantic! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 4:54 PM
Congratulations on your win,Rhonda, beautiful poem. Bless you
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 2:20 PM
congratulations Rhonda on your wonderful win , well done
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 2:17 PM
There's always this one guy your eyes follow all night and you pray they ask you. Dreams are so special and you captured this beautifully in this enchanting poem. Congratulations on your win Rhonda.
Kayode Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 1:07 PM
I am impressed Rhonda and so happy that the judge saw the beauty here,congtrats on this deserved win...huggs
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 11:57 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Rhonda:-) hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 4:15 PM
You are a true romantic, he must have been a fool not to extend your dance beyond the dance floor.
Thorisdottir  Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 8:00 AM
Oh my goodness, I love this work, it's sensual, and passionate and whatever prompted it's creation must have been a powerful moment indeed, my favorite I've read so far. :)
Allison Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 5:19 PM
beautiful imagery and flow to the poem - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan x
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