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A Nickel and a Dime

I only have a nickel and a dime
I can't take you out for lunch
Are you still mine?
I cannot buy you pretty rings of gold
To compliment that hand I love to hold
I am not a part of any high class clubs
But I'm passionate
And I can give you love
I love you
More then cash or anything
I love you
More then serenades could sing
I love you
Higher then a mountains peak
I love you
Deeper then an oceans wreath
I love you
Brighter then the sun can shine
But I only have a nickel and a dime



By Kyle Ezra Kriticos

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/20/2018 1:40:00 PM
We can tell you have much richness within, Kyle.
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Date: 6/20/2011 11:39:00 PM
a wonderful write full of true feelings. thank you for your comments :)--Madison
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Date: 6/16/2011 4:36:00 AM
nicely penned cory
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Date: 6/9/2011 12:37:00 PM
I love this...if only everyone felt this way...and looked what lies inside a person...and love that...not the things they have, their status, or the idea of them...but love a person for everything they are...the good and the bad....well done...
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Date: 6/7/2011 11:19:00 AM
I sigh for this kind of love, if only it would last. You must be a great lover. Elizabeth
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:10:00 AM
very nice kyle Luv*Skat
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