Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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A New Treasure

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Date: 12-07-2025
Contest: Drop The Cliche
Cliche Chosen: "Diamond In The Rough"


The lady of the house well-bred
There was her family's wealth
She couldn't tame her country man
Even though she tried with stealth

Her actions made you quiet, shy
But I saw buried gold 
You were a natural great pearl
New treasure to behold

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Victor Buhagiar December 8, 2025 at 2:22 AM A tribute to some great dame. So well written. Sara Kendrick December 8, 2025 at 2:39 AM Thank you, Victor. I appreciate the visit and review of my work. Sara K

sara Etgen-Baker December 7, 2025 at 5:38 PM outstanding retake of Diamond in the Rough....liked 'you were a natural great pearl. Best wishes with this contest entry, Sara K! hugs Sara Kendrick December 8, 2025 at 2:38 AM Thank you, Sara B., Your visit has been a great one to read first thing in the morning. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara K