A New Moon

mountain path---
at every turn
a new moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 1:42 PM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Brian's "176" contest Kash. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 12:28 AM
Kash, congratulations In Brian's CONTEST,, XOX, ;-) PD
Grisetti Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 12:08 PM
Very well done haiku. Perfect picture. And Congratulations.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 7:33 AM
Congrats on your win! This is an amazing haiku. You are a master. Mine looks undeserving in comparison. Blessings, Rhonda
Onclaud Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 3:27 AM
oh yeahhh!.. congrats, kashi... atta boy!..:) huggs!
May Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 5:55 PM
Congrats on your win Kash..
Williams Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 4:05 PM
Kash congrats on your win, love it..David
Guzzi Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 3:44 PM
wonderful win! So happy to share with you. Congrad's Light & Love
O'Leary Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 1:03 PM
I'm trying to understand/learn the art of Haiku... I can see I have a long way to go... Terry
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 10:45 AM
wow, way to go in his contest. I don't know what he wants sometimes!! Congrats, kash. It's a very well written haiku
Kapoor Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 6:29 AM
Another superb Haiku with all the depths of a new moon. Great concept in this lovely write my friend. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra
Das Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 1:31 PM
Wonderful haiku... 'aha'
Song Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 11:05 AM
Hi Kash...health going great I hope..lookin for some new stuff as you are able...still enjoying this moon that is made anew by each an every hiker's angle! :) Gwendolen
Kendrick Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 1:22 PM
This one is very expressive and descriptive..I could just see the scene..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading and taking time to comment on my work. Your comments were uplifting..Sara
Susan Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 10:29 AM
very hopeful piece and good visual :)
A   Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 9:15 AM
a lovely one Kash,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 11:28 PM
An interesting one. I am imagining a very impressive moon along that path!! haha. yep, the bird's wings are still flapping.
Neels Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 1:46 PM
nope not at all, I am enjoying the madness.. Don't worry ;-)
Neels Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 1:41 PM
do I have to do it now????????
Neels Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 1:38 PM
yep, positive ;-)
Neels Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 1:34 PM
a stunning haiku Kash ;) nope me not in love lol
Onclaud Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 12:42 PM
one word: awed!... you pinned it, kashi; your depth shows! :) huggs
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 11:24 AM
Wisely said kash. - oxox Anne-Lise
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