A New Moon

mountain path--- at every turn a new moon

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2012 1:42:00 PM

A belated congratulations on your placement in Brian's "176" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/16/2012 12:28:00 AM

Kash, congratulations In Brian's CONTEST,, XOX, ;-) PD

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/13/2012 12:08:00 PM

Very well done haiku. Perfect picture. And Congratulations.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/13/2012 7:33:00 AM

Congrats on your win! This is an amazing haiku. You are a master. Mine looks undeserving in comparison. Blessings, Rhonda

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/13/2012 3:27:00 AM

oh yeahhh!.. congrats, kashi... atta boy!..:) huggs!

Joseph May

Date: 5/12/2012 5:55:00 PM

Congrats on your win Kash..

David Williams

Date: 5/12/2012 4:05:00 PM

Kash congrats on your win, love it..David

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/12/2012 3:44:00 PM

wonderful win! So happy to share with you. Congrad's Light & Love

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/12/2012 1:03:00 PM

I'm trying to understand/learn the art of Haiku... I can see I have a long way to go... Terry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2012 10:45:00 AM

wow, way to go in his contest. I don't know what he wants sometimes!! Congrats, kash. It's a very well written haiku

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 5/6/2012 6:29:00 AM

Another superb Haiku with all the depths of a new moon. Great concept in this lovely write my friend. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra

Ashesh Das

Date: 5/1/2012 1:31:00 PM

Wonderful haiku... 'aha'

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/30/2012 11:05:00 AM

Hi Kash...health going great I hope..lookin for some new stuff as you are able...still enjoying this moon that is made anew by each an every hiker's angle! :) Gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2012 1:22:00 PM

This one is very expressive and descriptive..I could just see the scene..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading and taking time to comment on my work. Your comments were uplifting..Sara

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/24/2012 10:29:00 AM

very hopeful piece and good visual :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2012 9:15:00 AM

a lovely one Kash,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2012 11:28:00 PM

An interesting one. I am imagining a very impressive moon along that path!! haha. yep, the bird's wings are still flapping.

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/23/2012 1:46:00 PM

nope not at all, I am enjoying the madness.. Don't worry ;-)

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/23/2012 1:41:00 PM

do I have to do it now????????

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/23/2012 1:38:00 PM

yep, positive ;-)

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/23/2012 1:34:00 PM

a stunning haiku Kash ;) nope me not in love lol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/23/2012 12:42:00 PM

one word: awed!... you pinned it, kashi; your depth shows! :) huggs

Rick Parise

Date: 4/23/2012 11:54:00 AM

You are an inspiration to me. I love your haiku these days. I believe your one of the best. I will take these lessons and grow. Thanks Kash~God bless!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2012 11:24:00 AM

Wisely said kash. - oxox Anne-Lise