Michael J. Falotico Poet Haiku

A New Flower

The Precept: Nature's Haiku contest

                                                         a tear from Heaven.
                                              drops and splashes on the ground.
                                                         a new flower grows.

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Sara Kendrick July 10, 2011 at 11:40 AM Good one...Enjoyed..Congrats..Sara

Nette Onclaud July 9, 2011 at 10:18 PM grrreat stuff, michael..swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Jun-Jun Villanueva July 9, 2011 at 7:53 PM wow! so fantastic and it seems so excellent in every line....well-deserved win is yours..*-*junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 9, 2011 at 3:57 PM Congrats Michael on your fantastic win with this brilliant beauty and sheer vision of the precept luv.. amazing as always u are.. your Jersey Girl in beach mode once again with puppy and hubby having fun in the SUN.. wishing u two were here to enjoy luv..always and forever and beyond..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 9, 2011 at 12:09 PM Congratulations on your win Michael in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol

Kash Poet July 9, 2011 at 10:24 AM Congrats Michael on your win..wonderful take on the contest photo.

Dr.Ram Mehta July 9, 2011 at 9:05 AM My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, Michael

John Freeman July 9, 2011 at 8:55 AM Michael, I enjoyed reading your precept in life. Congratulations and thanks for supporting this effort. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne July 9, 2011 at 8:49 AM Many congrats, Michael : )

Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2011 at 11:25 PM I really like the different direction you took with yours, away from the whirlpool and focusing on a flower grown from water (a tear!)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 3, 2011 at 9:27 AM Your haiku is very beautiful, Michael :D Really like how you ended yours, that flower blossoming inspires so much hope :) and thank you, Michael, you'd have to celebrate the 4th of July for me ;) extra doses of celebration for you :D hugs your way :D

Dinda Minardi July 3, 2011 at 8:14 AM Beautiful, Michael! Love this! I hope I'll read new one from you tomorrow :)

Wilma Neels July 3, 2011 at 8:08 AM This is a beauty Michael, wishing you good luck for John's contest.. We don't celebrate 4th of July over here hun.. Hope you will enjoy the celebrations, love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 3, 2011 at 7:05 AM lovely images of the process of nature and it's power Michael.. tender words from your sweet heart my W,K... good luck in the contest.. your Jersey Girl in firecracker mode..and oh my poor ears from watching them all at the shore last night..awesome and wishing u were there too..luv..