A New Born

a new born
how the smell lingers
in your mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Rutherford Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 11:04 AM
Charles, you brought back happy memories with this haiku. well done. Anne
Grisetti Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 8:43 PM
very true. I still smell my little ones.
Cassiano Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 9:32 PM
this brought a gentle grin about.
Henderson Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 9:42 PM
Yes, I hope it was remembering the baby powder.
Onclaud Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 10:08 AM
delicate and whimsically penned 'ku here , charles... this works so well - the tight focus and the little detail bring the juxtaposition to a wonderful closing.. ;) huggs!
Chakrapany Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 12:53 AM
deep and perfect .thank you for sharing .jk
Brown Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 8:31 AM
I am so happy I was able to read your Haiku poetry today Charles. Thank you for sharing your writing with us always. So many diverse poems here and always a pleasure to read. Hoping you will continue to find the inspiration to write. Love, Carol
Owens Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 7:38 AM
Very nice Haiku Charles...enjoyed...Marty
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