A New Born

a new born how the smell lingers in your mind

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Anne Rutherford

Date: 7/30/2012 11:04:00 AM

Charles, you brought back happy memories with this haiku. well done. Anne

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/23/2012 8:43:00 PM

very true. I still smell my little ones.

Dina Cassiano

Date: 7/13/2012 9:32:00 PM

this brought a gentle grin about.

Charles Henderson
Date: 7/13/2012 9:42:00 PM

Yes, I hope it was remembering the baby powder.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/12/2012 10:08:00 AM

delicate and whimsically penned 'ku here , charles... this works so well - the tight focus and the little detail bring the juxtaposition to a wonderful closing.. ;) huggs!

Jayachandran Chakrapany

Date: 7/12/2012 12:53:00 AM

deep and perfect .thank you for sharing .jk

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/11/2012 8:31:00 AM

I am so happy I was able to read your Haiku poetry today Charles. Thank you for sharing your writing with us always. So many diverse poems here and always a pleasure to read. Hoping you will continue to find the inspiration to write. Love, Carol

Marty Owens

Date: 7/11/2012 7:38:00 AM

Very nice Haiku Charles...enjoyed...Marty