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A New Best Friend

"Would you like a doll, little girl?" "Oh, yes,Santa, I would," said she. "Could she please have a golden curl? I've never had a doll you see." And so she had a new best friend Who went with her everywhere. She swore to keep her to the end, And promised her all things to share. She held her hand and called her Sue, And learned the feeling of caring. She kept on loving as she grew For she found the gift of sharing. The girl grew to be very old. Memories dwindled to a few. "I've had a good life I am told - I know I had a doll named Sue." 9-26-18 For Julia Ward's contest A Poem of Reaction

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Date: 10/29/2018 3:36:00 PM
So beautiful--especially the last lines, very moving. CONGRATS, Larry! Janice
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/3/2018 1:44:00 PM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 10/28/2018 9:04:00 AM
Congrats on your podium finish with this very moving poem, Larry. Beautifully executed.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/28/2018 10:01:00 AM
Thanks, Line! Appreciate it !
Date: 10/28/2018 12:49:00 AM
Very moving, Larry. Congratulations on your second place win in my contest.
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Julia Ward
Date: 10/28/2018 11:17:00 AM
That's good. :)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/28/2018 6:58:00 AM
Thank you, Julia! Very pleased with the placement!!
Date: 9/28/2018 3:35:00 PM
Wow, Larry. Very sweet. A touching poem.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/28/2018 10:41:00 PM
Thank you,Line! You're very kind....

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