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A Near Invisible Crevice

Recognition of an aberration in the tenderness of embrace proffered signals a subtle yet clear evasion of love by the manner it’s been offered and thus entwinement of two souls deferred. The one who holds back love has a closed heart since ego urgings have yet to depart but the observer too must share the blame in having chosen to passively part, thus failing to rise above this mind game. 26-September-2022
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Tor Avatar
September 26, 2022 at 8:15 AM
Well written and truthfully expressed my friend...
Seeker Avatar
September 26, 2022 at 2:23 PM
Thank you, Michael ~ continuous contemplative consciousness correction gets us back on course though :)
Buhagiar Avatar
September 26, 2022 at 7:41 AM
There are times when love does not meet the requirements f fellowship.
Seeker Avatar
September 26, 2022 at 2:24 PM
Ah, yes indeed and that’s an earth life test too isn’t it? Let the flame of love never flicker even if the echo returns not
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