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Recognition of an aberration in the tenderness of embrace proffered signals a subtle yet clear evasion of love by the manner it’s been offered and thus entwinement of two souls deferred. The one who holds back love has a closed heart since ego urgings have yet to depart but the observer too must share the blame in having chosen to passively part, thus failing to rise above this mind game. 26-September-2022

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Date: 9/26/2022 8:15:00 AM
Well written and truthfully expressed my friend...
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/26/2022 2:23:00 PM
Thank you, Michael ~ continuous contemplative consciousness correction gets us back on course though :)
Date: 9/26/2022 7:41:00 AM
There are times when love does not meet the requirements f fellowship.
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Date: 9/26/2022 2:24:00 PM
Ah, yes indeed and that’s an earth life test too isn’t it? Let the flame of love never flicker even if the echo returns not

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