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A Naughty Party

Arrived at a costume party, in sexy evening gown. The women acted quite haughty wearing such evil frowns. "Who do you think you are?" they cried. My cheeks were blushing pink. I sought a place to run and hide. First, I needed a drink. After my fourth margarita I was in no hurry to be a shy senorita. My vision was blurry. I approached some men in the room, cleavage bared, eyes flirty. "Any of you gents have a broom? Those women are dirty." My slurred remarks garnered loud cheers. Men praised, my words lauded. I heard the snooty women's leers. I smiled and applauded. It was their husbands, around me, begging for the last dance. I laughed so hard, I had to pee, and away I did prance. 7/22/2016 Pink Domino contest Sara Kendrick

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Date: 7/30/2016 8:48:00 AM
Your wonderful work got my attention! I am so glad to place it in the winners’ list..Congrats to you. Sara
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Date: 7/30/2016 12:42:00 AM
Nothing like a bit of unexpected/unplanned cold justice to people who thumb their nose at you. Or so as this poem goes. lol, bet those husbands get an ear full later. Good poem, thanks for sharing Marti.
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Date: 7/29/2016 4:02:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Marti:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/29/2016 3:56:00 PM
I love this. I don't know why -- I just do! ;-) Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 7/24/2016 9:00:00 AM
Great party. I enjoyed that.
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Date: 7/23/2016 10:39:00 AM
hahaha. You have Such GREAT humor, Marti. I am being inspired seeing all the pink poems posted today. I think this contest and Tiger walk are on my agenda for today and then I will have TEN to get posted next few weeks!! WEll, time to get off here finally. I am all caught up.
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Date: 7/22/2016 5:52:00 PM
well, the best girl always wins in the end... greeat comic relief for a friday rush, marti.. huggs
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Date: 7/22/2016 4:38:00 PM
Truly entertained by your lovely sense of humour, Marti:) Enjoy the weekend! Regards // paul
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Date: 7/22/2016 1:46:00 PM
Great humour Marti - think we were both at the same party lol;-) hug jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/22/2016 3:14:00 PM
I prefer a cup of tea these days lol:-) hugs jan xx

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