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A nature haiky for once

Leaves fall one by one onto the shadowy pond sailing in heaven

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/22/2009 11:28:00 AM
The title is LOL great here, Anthony. Love the last line and great job with the form!!
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Date: 8/13/2009 3:48:00 AM
Awww this is truly beautiful Anthony. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/12/2009 4:53:00 PM
Pure beauty! Great work, Anthony! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/12/2009 12:18:00 PM
Amazing haiku!
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Date: 8/12/2009 12:18:00 PM
this visuals i love it, good haiky indeed (:
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