A Naked Beauty

She stood there in all her naked beauty,
the man approached her with reverence,
as he stood in front of her drinking in
her exquisite womanhood with awe struck wonder.

Gently he runs his fingers up and down her
searching out her body and crevices.
Pausing here and there lightly stroking
finding her hidden imperfections.

Taking out his hammer and chisel
he gently chips away her blemishes.
Smoothing the marble surface as he goes.
At last satisfied he stands back admiringly.

She glows in the fading sunlight,
seeming to come to life as dusk falls.
the sculptor sighs with pleasure.
It was worth the many hours of work
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 7:06 AM
You have the stone life quite alive with your imagery, a nice piece on the art of sculpting, Shadow. An artist never reaches perfection till he creates nudes.
Yvonne Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 9:00 PM
great concept. i enjoyed this read thank you.
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 6:13 PM
Oh I love the fact it was a statue - fabulous imagery - you had me guessing there Shadow! Hugs Jan xxx
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