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A Mutton Heart

a mutton heart
sharpened, wizened
disheartened

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Line Gauthier

April 18, 2026 at 4:58 PM

sheepishy good ~

Kim Rodrigues

April 18, 2026 at 9:41 PM

Not baaad then. ;) Thank you, Line!

Sara Kendrick

February 24, 2026 at 5:39 AM

Creative work on display. Sometimes we get disheartened and it is hard to overcome. Thanks for sharing this one. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

February 24, 2026 at 9:33 AM

Thank you, Sara!

Gershon Wolf

February 21, 2026 at 8:48 PM

Ingenious use of disheartened there, Kim. ~ Pea Brain, in comparison to you, at any rate

Kim Rodrigues

February 22, 2026 at 11:33 AM

You make me smile! Hugs

sara Etgen-Baker

February 21, 2026 at 5:55 PM

definitely felt sadness in these few lines. Liked it.

Kim Rodrigues

February 22, 2026 at 11:34 AM

Yes, you can see it. Thank you, Sara!

Andrea Dietrich

February 21, 2026 at 2:40 PM

Oooh cool last line

Kim Rodrigues

February 21, 2026 at 3:46 PM

Thank you xx

Paige Hind

February 21, 2026 at 12:55 PM

I can feel the sadness. This is really a raw image in my mind. Some hugs-

Kim Rodrigues

February 21, 2026 at 1:29 PM

Thank you…

Paula Goldsmith

February 21, 2026 at 7:24 AM

Few words with much said. I enjoyed reading. Have a great day/weekend writing away..............

Kim Rodrigues

February 21, 2026 at 1:29 PM

Thank you, Paula!

A Mutton Heart

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