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A Mouse's Telescope

If you leave a mouse a telescope, I'm sure he'll look through it. If you leave that scope upon a hill, I'm sure that's where he'll sit. If you leave it there in dark of night, I'm sure he'll try to find a light that's round and bright and made of Brie, then gaze upon it happily while wond'ring how to shake it down and share it with his friends in town because, well that's what mice would do. If I were one, I'd do that too. But I'm sure if he cannot displace that roundish piece of cheese from space, he'll set his little eyes upon the specks of sparkling Parmesan that permeate the purple night: though small, they're just as good a light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/11/2010 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Michael. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 10:32:00 AM
What would happen if you left the mouse a pea? This is clever and I enjoyed it very mucho. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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Date: 8/9/2010 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Michael. Wishing you the best always on your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2010 6:02:00 AM
What an excellent write. Thank you for sharing Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:08:00 PM
cute poem, sounds like a childs poem/lullabye
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:41:00 PM
ENJOYED YOUR POEM. LOVELY RYHMING -IRMA
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:35:00 PM
Love the rhyme and rhythm and the theme of this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:16:00 PM
Really cute children's poem that's crying out to be illustrated. The second stanza is my favourite. I'll read this one to my three year-old niece, she'll love it. ~ Sharon :)
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