A Mouse's Telescope

If you leave a mouse a telescope,
I'm sure he'll look through it.
If you leave that scope upon a hill,
I'm sure that's where he'll sit.

If you leave it there in dark of night,
I'm sure he'll try to find a light
that's round and bright and made of Brie,
then gaze upon it happily
while wond'ring how to shake it down
and share it with his friends in town

because, well that's what mice would do.
If I were one, I'd do that too.

But I'm sure if he cannot displace
that roundish piece of cheese from space,
he'll set his little eyes upon
the specks of sparkling Parmesan

that permeate the purple night:
though small, they're just as good a light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 12:31 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Michael. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 10:32 AM
What would happen if you left the mouse a pea? This is clever and I enjoyed it very mucho. Congrats on the selection. Dave
Brown Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Michael. Wishing you the best always on your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 6:02 AM
What an excellent write. Thank you for sharing Michael. Love, Carol
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June 7, 2010 at 6:08 PM
cute poem, sounds like a childs poem/lullabye
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June 7, 2010 at 4:41 PM
ENJOYED YOUR POEM. LOVELY RYHMING -IRMA
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June 7, 2010 at 4:35 PM
Love the rhyme and rhythm and the theme of this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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June 7, 2010 at 4:16 PM
Really cute children's poem that's crying out to be illustrated. The second stanza is my favourite. I'll read this one to my three year-old niece, she'll love it. ~ Sharon :)
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