A Motionless Dance

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A velvet hushed glow. A subtle fragrance, A warm wind swept flow. A motionless dance. Body hugging petals; Natures beauty settles. Maurice Yvonne 16~10~2014 Sponsor: nette onclaud Contest Name: DESIGN YOUR TABLEAU "Happiness doesn't lie in the objects we gather around us. To find it, all we need to do is open our eyes.”

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2014 4:22:00 PM

hey did you change the title of this one today? hahaha

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/25/2014 4:34:00 PM

If you can't laugh at yourself...Yes I changed the title today. Aren't I adorable?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2014 4:21:00 PM

hmmm, very odd that this was not on the winners' page. It was one of the best I had seen!

Daver Austin

Date: 10/17/2014 10:14:00 AM

So, you like to write poetry to pictures too. I would like this little gem just as well without the picture. Always enjoy. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2014 9:25:00 PM

this is just glorious, Maurice. I feel afraid that I won't be able to be in this contest. My muse is not with me lately and her contest is filling up way too fast. You did such a good job. GREAT picture too. a seven for sure. This time the captcha is ESX. good grief.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/16/2014 9:26:00 PM

I don't think we should fight it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/16/2014 8:46:00 AM

- Beautiful, Maurice! - I have chosen the same topic, Happiness - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)