A Mothers Love

Dont tell him I'm dead she said
 As I sat by her death bed
 Holding her hand I said
 Don't worry now mama
 Just rest your head
 You are the strong one she said
 As I held back the tears
 That would drown me for years

 I smiled at her and said
 Don't worry now mama
 Just rest your head
 Two years later
 Her son was dead
 The loss of his mother
 Haunted his head
 As I sat by his bed and said
 Don't worry now bro
 Just rest your head

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/26/2013 11:05:00 AM
I love your poem. It is very good. I love the flow and very meaningful. Your friend warren
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/27/2013 4:29:00 AM
Thank you Warren, A mothers love is indeed a blessing. love and best wishes for a peaceful and happy new year. Elizabeth
Date: 1/31/2013 7:18:00 AM
"I would like to thank you all for your loving support while i was going through all this pain, So glad i was in such loving supportive company, don't know how i would have managed without you all, love Elizabeth xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx"
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Date: 1/29/2013 7:43:00 AM
This one breaks my heart. I have held my own mother's hand......but to lose a brother too......is hard to even imagine. Beautiful and touching!
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 1/29/2013 10:54:00 AM
Thank you Carrie, it still brings tears to my eyes, but by the grace of God we get through such pain, love Elizabeth
Date: 12/18/2012 11:36:00 AM
Dear Elizabeth, What a Powerful POEM this is. The more I read of YOU the Higher the Inspiration allows me to go Thank-YOU LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/18/2012 5:30:00 PM
Thank you Harry,xox love Elizabeth
Date: 12/16/2012 7:59:00 AM
Elizabeth very strong, I like a lot...David
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/16/2012 11:49:00 AM
Thank you David, this actually did happen, love Elizabeth
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