A Mothers Love

Dont tell him I'm dead she said
 As I sat by her death bed
 Holding her hand I said
 Don't worry now mama
 Just rest your head
 You are the strong one she said
 As I held back the tears
 That would drown me for years

 I smiled at her and said
 Don't worry now mama
 Just rest your head
 Two years later
 Her son was dead
 The loss of his mother
 Haunted his head
 As I sat by his bed and said
 Don't worry now bro
 Just rest your head
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Locklear Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 11:05 AM
I love your poem. It is very good. I love the flow and very meaningful. Your friend warren
O'Driscoll Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 4:29 AM
Thank you Warren, A mothers love is indeed a blessing. love and best wishes for a peaceful and happy new year. Elizabeth
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January 31, 2013 at 7:18 AM
"I would like to thank you all for your loving support while i was going through all this pain, So glad i was in such loving supportive company, don't know how i would have managed without you all, love Elizabeth xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx"
Richards Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 7:43 AM
This one breaks my heart. I have held my own mother's hand......but to lose a brother too......is hard to even imagine. Beautiful and touching!
O'Driscoll Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 10:54 AM
Thank you Carrie, it still brings tears to my eyes, but by the grace of God we get through such pain, love Elizabeth
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December 18, 2012 at 11:36 AM
Dear Elizabeth, What a Powerful POEM this is. The more I read of YOU the Higher the Inspiration allows me to go Thank-YOU LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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December 18, 2012 at 5:30 PM
Thank you Harry,xox love Elizabeth
Williams Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 7:59 AM
Elizabeth very strong, I like a lot...David
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December 16, 2012 at 11:49 AM
Thank you David, this actually did happen, love Elizabeth
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