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Contest Judged:  4/11/2018 1:58:00 PM

6th - Green Trophy by Artsieladie

Sixth place.
Trophy by Artsieladie

A Mother's Love

When I became a mother, tremendous joy filled my heart,
But little did I know about this journey at the start.
I thought I knew what Love is, even Love profound,
With every cry and coo, every babbling, baby sound.
All my protective instincts kicked in naturally
And giving was a pleasure to my child, especially.
My heart was filled with Love to a degree without scope.
Everything of myself I invested in the center of my hope.

All the times when my child was so sick and listless;
Although I did all I could, I felt completely helpless.
Then all the worldly woes my child would be subjected to,
Like in school, the bullying, they'd have to suffer through;
All the cruelties of life a mother would gladly take on
To spare her child grief and sorrow, a mother woebegone. 
All the sleepless nights don't end in their infancy,
They're just the prelude to all the years of worry yet to be. 

When the teen years roll in though and on into early adult,
Mother becomes rather unimportant, is blamed for all the fault.
Suddenly the mother becomes stupid, the teen knows everything
And feels embarrassed when mother, along with, they must bring.
Many hurtful words are said that stab and bleed a mother's heart,
But unconditional Love remains though her heart is torn apart.
Still, her child is her child to Love, to guide, protect;
Harm her child and mother's wrath one won't wish to resurrect.

When one becomes a mother, there are years of sacrifice;
This role is for life and can't be bought for any price.
Each memory she cherishes, sustains her when she's forgotten.
Still she'll never trade for anything a child she's begotten.
A voluntary position with demands like no other role,
A mother signs on for, for life to always Love another soul.
I thought I knew what Love is, even Love profound,
Until with motherhood I was blessed and forever crowned.

When I became a mother and a life was trusted in my care,
So much more I understood for it's then I became aware
Of all my Mother's endless Love, multiplied by ten.
As a mother, from a mother, I've learned what Love is time and time again.

Entered in 'Non Romantic Love - Poetry Contest'
Sponsored by Emile Pinet
2018-04-07
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 5:26 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Artsieladie.
Donnelly Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Thank you, Line. :) ~ Artsie
Neumann Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 2:13 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations on your win, Kai
Donnelly Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 3:10 PM
Thank you, Kai. :) ~ Artsie
Gentry Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 7:28 PM
What an awesome write. Congratulations on your win! Wonderful depiction of motherhood.
Donnelly Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 3:09 PM
Thank you, Susan. First hand experience is the best teacher and for providing material to write about I think. :) ~ Artsie
Haight Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 4:04 PM
What a beautiful poem, Artsie, and every mother can identify with what you wrote...the ups and downs, the good and bad...it is a rollercoaster raising children and the dedication of a mother, with her unending love, is unsurpassable. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners! Hugs, Sandra
Donnelly Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 2:31 PM
Thank you, Sandra. A Mother's Love is said to be second only to God's Love. :) hugs ~ Artsie
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Your lovely poem embodies all that it means to be a mother Artsieladie. I raised three and their temperaments are all different though they are all Scorpios born in the first week of November. During the teen years when they feel they must pull away from you it is heartbreaking. Congratulations on your wonderful much deserved win with this gem! : )
Donnelly Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 2:01 PM
Thank you, Connie. Yes, it's tough during their 'fledgling' years. All 3 in Nov. & in the same week! A week of birthdays, too! I have 1, a daughter, a cancerian. I would've liked to have had more but it wasn't to be. Of all the aspects of my life, there's none more a blessing, a privilege, an honour, enlightening, and more challenging AND rewarding than being a mother. :) ~ Artsie
Allison Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 3:08 PM
A poem that should be given to every mother at birth Artsie! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Donnelly Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 1:41 PM
Thank you, Jan. Or maybe beforehand. Maybe then women who aren't cut out for motherhood would make the choice that's right for them. Choosing not to be a mother is not a bad thing. It's only bad when women become mothers that never really wanted to in the first place. :) hugs ~ Artsie
Pinet Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 2:15 PM
Congratulations Artsieladie, your poem earned a place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Donnelly Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 1:10 PM
Thank you, Emile, for sponsoring the contest & for including my poem among the top ten. I feel honoured. I enter a contest not to win but b/c I feel & like being inspired to write a poem. Any creation starts at the point of inspiration. With so many fab' poems, judging must be very difficult. :) ~ Artsie
Krutsinger Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 9:04 AM
This is the grand champion winner of the FULLY UNDERSTANDS BEING A MOTHER award, Artsie. Love it! yes, time and time again. And we become instantly stupid when they hit about 11.
Donnelly Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Aw, thank you so much, Caren, from one mother to another. -hug- I can't imagine how anyone who is a mother can not learn and know the true and surreal meaning of Love and not just once but repeatedly in all sorts of different ways. Yes, instantly stupid! ha ha :) ~ Artsie xx
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