A Mothers Concern

A Mothers Concern

Dear My Children,
I know you will moan, cry and weep for me; now that I’m gone.
I found my resting place; know that I’m never alone.
God will always be with you, He has never failed you yet,
Just remember the joy we've had a time well spent
You can sing, shout tell jokes to you hearts content; but know this…I love you: my love you will never forget.
Continue to look out for each another, 
let your love be known, ‘cause mom is looking down
from heaven up above. 
A Mothers Concern
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mason Gibbs Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 9:14 PM
Very nice and heartfelt tribute, love it.
Priest Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 1:12 PM
Thank You
Jordan Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Hello my friend, I've been down your road of lost loved one's, and the pain moans deep. Nice poem that I enjoyed profoundly, but, the line, "He has never failed you yet," to me implies that He may let us down. God, will never let us down period! He always on time. Would be "Great" poem without "Yet." Stay strong, always Ken
Priest Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 11:21 AM
Thank You, that was not the intent, but I will changed that. I truly appreciate your comment.
A  Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 6:30 PM
Jeanette:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Sietesantos Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 9:09 AM
Hi Jeanette, I am so glad I came across this beautiful heart-tugging piece! Apart from being an excellent write, it expresses emotions that are so reflective of what we as loving mothers feel for our precious children! Bravo, my friend and I rate this a solid "7"! Warmest regards. Pandita.
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September 26, 2015 at 1:12 PM
thank you
Desikachari Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 1:21 AM
A mother's love towards her children knows no bounds, even after her mortal frame quits this world! Your poem is soul-stirring and beautifully penned.I like it.
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February 16, 2015 at 7:31 AM
Thank You
A   Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 4:03 PM
Jeanette, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
Priest Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 11:20 AM
Thanks Poet
A  Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 3:17 PM
Jeanette, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Priest Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 4:02 PM
Thanks Skat, I appreciate that,
Mcdaid Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 5:37 PM
a mother truly an angel always held in the heart deep touching very beautifully penned piece jeanette bless you
Priest Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 7:07 PM
Thank you liam, I appreciate your comment, I just lost my aunt, and I felt compelled to write that to her kids on her behalf
Yant Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 2:26 PM
Welcome to the sight...everything is going to be alright. This was a touching poem. Thanks
Priest Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 2:28 PM
Thanks ,Daisy Marie Yant
Priest Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 2:27 PM
Sorry about spelling your name,
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February 6, 2015 at 2:16 PM
- So sweet and lovely poem your first poem here at the P- Soup - Welcome Jeanette ! - I wish you a great weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Priest Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 2:25 PM
Thanks Anne-Lose, yes it's my first poem. I written this the same day my aunt passed way which was three days ago
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