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"a Morning Treasure"

The morning air blows through my room... The curves of your back as it rides in tune... Your radiant smile is my start of the day... A morning back rub with no words to say... Lifting sheets to a treasure so priceless... A boy in a candy shop running so fearless... The warmer you are the sweeter the taste.. . From your lower back to your neck no part done in haste... Every morning with you is a dream covered in peaches and cream... From morning to night and all in between....

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Sharon Tideswell

Date: 7/30/2010 5:22:00 AM

Very nice... relaxing and sensual ~ Sharon :)

M.I.A .

Date: 7/28/2010 8:38:00 PM

Beautiful, I can almost picture 'your' essence... or perhaps 'capture' it sounds better ^.^

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/27/2010 6:04:00 AM

Omw, how did I miss this one Michael? you really have a way with words, saying so much with so little.. Once again another one to add to my list.. ffct Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/25/2010 9:56:00 AM

Lovely and beautiful .. an emotional romantic pleasurable read and write... full of LUV with delicate passionate overtones... the scene is so serene and magical Michael.. Wow.. another great gift and 'treasure' from u my W.K. with luv..