A Morning Awakens

Awakened by the kiss of dawn
the softness of her morning light
gently nudges the night away

The dew drops twinkle on the lawn
a bird sings sweetly his delight, 
his trilling, courteous and gay

The garden flowers seem to spring
amidst the green they gently sway
floral fragrance floats on the breeze

The bayou softly murmuring
wavering shadows still at play,
lost in the depths of cypress trees

A squirrel scampers to the ground
and across the yard he rushes
buries acorns without a sound

In the distance a baying hound
eager to hunt in the bushes
until fox or raccoon is found

A horse gallops over a hill
enjoying freedom and the sun,
he stops, grazing in grassy fields

I follow nature and be still
watching as the day has begun
and early morning beauty yields

© 07/29/2019
Tri-Con Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Emile Pinet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 8:04 AM
Congrats on your win, Alesia. Well done.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 11:58 PM
I am so impressed with your Tri-Con Alesia. Your magnificent imagery leaps off the page and into my sight as if I were there seeing the scene in person. So deserving of your Third Place win! Congratulations! You have honored my form! xxoo : )
Mcgee Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 5:07 PM
You had me with the first stanza. such a lovely flow through out. Congrats on your top win.
Adams Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 11:36 AM
I love sitting outside watching morning unfold...i only wish work wouldn't get in the way some days....Congrats on your top win with this beautiful poem :) hugs
Krutsinger Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 10:07 AM
A beautiful tribute to nature; your imagery is terrific. Great job!
Pinet Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 9:25 AM
Congratulations Alesia, your poem earned "Third Place" in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Leach Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 10:20 AM
Thanks, Emile. It would be hard to judge in here. everyone does such wonderful poems. ;0)
Ashley Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 9:26 AM
Your brilliant poem captured my heart and imagination with its beauty and serenity, Alesia. A tranquil yet vibrant feast for the senses that transported me to this perfect scene. Exquisite imagery framed in a beautiful poetry form. Wonderfully done! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you always my friend.. ~Susan
Roper Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 8:47 PM
Just to wake up and walk the path of these wonderful surroundings.. Great description leaving one with a serene feel. Good luck in Emile's contest. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 6:29 PM
what fabulous imagery Alesia I enjoyed the sights and sounds in your poem. i especially loved the first stanza it is truly beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
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