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Eternal as the sea's unceasing roll our love is real; it's not just pretend; let us hold hands and take a moonlight stroll. Although the sands of time levied a toll, rather than break; our hearts learned how to bend, eternal as the sea's unceasing roll. Death assumes life will relinquish control; and yet, we don't believe death is the end, let us hold hands and take a moonlight stroll. Age wears us down, grating flesh, heart, and soul, but death is nothing that love can't transcend; eternal as the sea's unceasing roll. We are each a half of what makes us whole, you are my soulmate, as well as my friend; let us hold hands and take a moonlight stroll. One day, our grief may be as dark as coal yet love, trust, and faith are a potent blend, eternal as the sea's unceasing roll; let us hold hands and take a moonlight stroll.

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Date: 3/19/2018 10:17:00 PM
great POEM, Emile. "Age wears us down grating both heart and soul and yet there’s nothing love cannot transcend"
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Date: 6/19/2017 1:31:00 PM
Beautiful, may the hands never let go.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/19/2017 5:28:00 PM
Thanks DM, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/19/2017 12:31:00 PM
This is so very nice Emile. A favorite I would like to save. Written so well with reminder of a beautiful message :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/19/2017 5:29:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi, I can always count on you to leave a beautiful comment my friend, Emile.

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