A Monkey Tale

My mom’d just had a baby
And so to give her space,
My nana and my grandpa
Took me to a special place.

We passed a toy store on the way
And quickly we were stopping.
I found a doll I really loved;
I’d nailed this thing called shopping.

My nana loved to buy me things
But mom had made it clear
No matter what, there was to be
No toy or souvenir.

I left the store dejected
But we drove on to the zoo.
It cheered me and improved my mood,
As zoos are wont to do.

I noticed something rather strange – 
A monkey with no cage.
At five years old the danger
I was not equipped to gauge.

As I bent down to pet it,
Its reaction was pure fright.
Before I knew what happened,
I’d received a monkey bite!

My nana was hysterical;
I guess I was as well.
The doctor stitched me up
And I kept up my crying spell.

To calm me down, my grandpa asked
How can we stop those tears?
A lightbulb flashed – the doll! I said,
Quite clever for my years.

And so I got a brand-new doll,
Accessories to match.
My grandpa’s guilt was dangling
Like a prize for me to catch.

The lesson that I learned was this:
No matter your intent,
A promise made is etched in sand
More often than cement.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pritts Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 4:48 PM
Excellent. Well versed and well rhymed. This poem had everything that I enjoy from the first word to the last. Thanks for sharing it and giving me a smile. Rockman :-)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 21, 2012 at 4:42 AM
Absouutely priceless, love it ,what a caany gal you were xx
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2012 at 8:02 PM
hahaha, PRICELESS> you had them pegged at a very young age. I LOVE this.
Jones Avatar
April 20, 2012 at 5:42 PM
I'm sensin' the next Aesop here, with over and undertones of Silverstein. Awesome as always, ilene, good to read you, please write on! ~N
Grisetti Avatar
April 20, 2012 at 3:27 PM
A lovely poem, just suited to read to children.
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