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4/11/2025 for The Cold Embrace of Death sponsored by Sara Jama

A Momentary Chill

Although I cannot hear your sound, 
I feel you must be hanging 'round
as I grow old.
I can't fool myself or pretend.  
You don't compromise or bend
when it's time for me to end. 
Why are you so cold? 

You're like a woman in a fantasy
I think about but never see. 
Through hardship and strife,  
at times you offered me relief,
escape from pain and grief,
and though you're a heartless thief, 
you wouldn't take my life. 

The time, now near, I have no choice,
I listen, but I don't hear your voice, 
lying quiet and still.
Will you inundate me with fear
or comfort me like a teddy bear?
I only feel, as I disappear, 
a momentary chill.
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Rodrigues Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 11:17 AM
Will you inundate me with fear or comfort me like a teddy bear? …if fear, perhaps an evil spirit. I’d rather think a teddy bear…hope it doesn’t growl. Should I be serious? Seriously? Hugs
Crandall Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 11:23 AM
haha, with my luck, he will probably growl and then his claws will emerge.
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