A Moment of Romance

as the sun sets
your eyes start to glow
the sun shines off your face
i feel more then just alive
as i touch your hand
i leant against you
as our heads touch
i look into your eyes
you give me a smile
--to be continued sorry, i gotta go--
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hallett Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 11:11 AM
Very nice. Glad u used my advice. if u want more just let me know!!! Love Courtney:)
Palli Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 1:03 PM
Nice moment
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