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A Moment of Passion

I love you my darling with all my heart Wonder how many times that's been said At the moment of passion when love bursts forth Two hearts intertwine, passions fed That moment of bliss, the follow up kiss Is there anything else that compares With this overpowering lust and desire The sheer pleasure of that moment shared I'm feeling great passion rising within me As the words start to form on my screen Passionate love words describing my feelings As you emit tiny pleasurable screams If a Heaven exists, then this must be it Nothing has ever equaled this pleasure To bottle this feeling and sell it in stores Would guaranty success beyond measure I love you my darling with all my heart Wonder how many times that's been said At that moment of passion when love bursts forth Two hearts intertwine, passions fed

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Date: 2/9/2022 2:01:00 PM
Jack, I loved the way you repeated the first stanza. It really brought the poem home. Nice work.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/10/2022 3:47:00 AM
Thanks my good friend! Much appreciated Milton!
Date: 2/9/2022 8:36:00 AM
Jack, Fine Rhyme, wished they could bottle the feeling too. Wish all darlings success in intertwined travels. -Richard
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/9/2022 9:02:00 AM
Thank you friend... much appreciated! Cheers Jack!
Date: 2/9/2022 8:05:00 AM
Very romantic verse Jack, you're in valentines mood. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/9/2022 8:16:00 AM
Oh you've noticed! LOL Love is in the air.......

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