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A Moment of Bliss

**A DEDICATION TO MY FUTURE, TRUE LOVE.** A moment of bliss For you and i, A moment so real I feel it will never end. The sound of our kisses The promises Of our future, The absence of heart Break torture, The words of our eye balls The verdicts of our hearts... Builds our walls of bliss. A moment of bliss For you and i, A moment of laughter, Laughter to last longer, Prolonging our affair that Is sealed above. A moment of bliss. For you and i, When you read those verses, Slowly and mildly, Piecing through my soul, Like mothers words... A moment of bliss, For you and i, A moment so sweet like cherries And candies. A moment so smooth like The surface of your lips... Leaving me in a trance, When i recover, We will continue from where We stopped... Savoring the bliss for you and i... "WHEN SHE COMES IN, IT WILL BE ALL BLISS"

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Date: 7/21/2011 11:23:00 AM
Savoring the bliss of this poem. This is so beautifully written!!
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Date: 12/9/2010 9:34:00 PM
I love it, Melody maker. You are a very sweet thinkable guy.. I think your persona is awesome,, I'm glad to have meet you here at the soup.. at a very not so good state in my life.. Hope your bliss last forever,, and you take her 2 the real (cloud 10).. by the way if you don't mind would U like 2 take a trip with me. 2 my poem (cloud 10 & cloud 5) lol,, It's my turn 2 ask U 2 go destroy my poems with your comments. I hope my witty comments don't bother you, and thanks for the smile, p.d.
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Date: 12/1/2010 5:52:00 AM
a beauty,especially the last stanza. .tmfvs
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Date: 11/25/2010 7:21:00 AM
My son, you will find that love of your life in a beautiful wife. Have faith and God will find you that special lady to love and cherish. Nothing is better than love. Love mom
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Date: 11/23/2010 7:06:00 PM
I read below here, for the future love of your life (what WIlma said) So you have no one right now? That would be a shame for such a sweet guy like you!
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Date: 11/20/2010 10:39:00 AM
Charles a beautiful write for the future love of your life..
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Date: 11/20/2010 10:36:00 AM
a truely beautiful write for that future somebody,, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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