Sara Kendrick Poet Shape

A Moment Not Wanted To Relive

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To read:
Start at the d
in the middle
read counter clockwise
Inspire by contest
Of Blackeyed Susan
Written: !2-26-13

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Skat A February 10, 2014 at 4:21 PM deep Sara, thank you for the nice re-turn visit. :) Congrats,.. I WOULDN'T want to relive this either. Loving it ~SKAT~

Len Gasun January 10, 2014 at 12:36 PM My hearty congratulations on your great win here my dear friend Sara! A very good form as well. I'm reading here a "doctor's diagnosis one in a ch size tumor" , am I right? You're very creative but I hope you are always at the zenith of good health my very dear friend of mine. Biggest hugs to u from me. Congratulations again for the great poem, form and win! love lots, Leonora

Richard Lamoureux January 10, 2014 at 8:35 AM Avery effective piece, congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta January 9, 2014 at 9:29 PM Doctor's diagnosis tumor.... Richard Lamoureux January 10, 2014 at 5:26 PM Doctor's diagnosis a one inch size tumor.

Dr.Ram Mehta January 9, 2014 at 9:26 PM I am still baffled, but Congrats on the win.

Carrie Richards January 9, 2014 at 10:08 AM Wow....this grabs one in the pit of the stomach, and sends a chill up my spine. What a winner this is!

Roger Horsch January 9, 2014 at 8:55 AM I seen something about the doctor's diagnosis and the words size tumor. This is a very nice win Sara, Congrats But a little hard to read....Hugs....Roger

Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2013 at 12:26 AM sara, this is very creative, but I can't understand the ending. I am seeing: Doctor's diagnosis . Then I go over to the left and I am guessing it to be: one in / a .....?? (top word on right. it is not making sense for me): ch/size?? Let me know if I got the last part close or not!!

Poet Destroyer A December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM I would not like for you to relive the diagnoses again.. It is sad.. But, a good shape... A clever way in shaping this one... xox..LINDA

Russell Sivey December 26, 2013 at 6:47 AM I couldn't read the whole thing, but I believe the gist of it is that the Doctor said there was no tumor! Am I right? If so that is great news! If I'm wrong, I am sorry! I did see the word size up on top, but maybe I'm wrong? But I like to think positive, it got me through everything before! But anyway, I believe, and hope, that this is great news my friend! Well I want to wish you a Happy New Year Sara! And I hope your Christmas was a special one! This is a wonderful write! Great Work!! Russell Sivey December 26, 2013 at 6:49 AM I guess by the title, if I was just paying attention, would show that this was bad news...I'm sorry about that my friend! If there is anything you need just let me know!