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A Moment Not Wanted To Relive

. o t s c i r o h z s' d c e d t n i u i a m e g o n n r o o a s i s To read: Start at the d in the middle read counter clockwise Inspire by contest Of Blackeyed Susan Written: !2-26-13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/10/2014 4:21:00 PM
deep Sara, thank you for the nice re-turn visit. :) Congrats,.. I WOULDN'T want to relive this either. Loving it ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/10/2014 12:36:00 PM
My hearty congratulations on your great win here my dear friend Sara! A very good form as well. I'm reading here a "doctor's diagnosis one in a ch size tumor" , am I right? You're very creative but I hope you are always at the zenith of good health my very dear friend of mine. Biggest hugs to u from me. Congratulations again for the great poem, form and win! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 1/10/2014 8:35:00 AM
Avery effective piece, congratulations.
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Date: 1/9/2014 9:29:00 PM
Doctor's diagnosis tumor....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/10/2014 5:26:00 PM
Doctor's diagnosis a one inch size tumor.
Date: 1/9/2014 9:26:00 PM
I am still baffled, but Congrats on the win.
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Date: 1/9/2014 10:08:00 AM
Wow....this grabs one in the pit of the stomach, and sends a chill up my spine. What a winner this is!
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Date: 1/9/2014 8:55:00 AM
I seen something about the doctor's diagnosis and the words size tumor. This is a very nice win Sara, Congrats But a little hard to read....Hugs....Roger
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Date: 12/28/2013 12:26:00 AM
sara, this is very creative, but I can't understand the ending. I am seeing: Doctor's diagnosis . Then I go over to the left and I am guessing it to be: one in / a .....?? (top word on right. it is not making sense for me): ch/size?? Let me know if I got the last part close or not!!
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Date: 12/27/2013 12:00:00 AM
I would not like for you to relive the diagnoses again.. It is sad.. But, a good shape... A clever way in shaping this one... xox..LINDA
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Date: 12/26/2013 6:47:00 AM
I couldn't read the whole thing, but I believe the gist of it is that the Doctor said there was no tumor! Am I right? If so that is great news! If I'm wrong, I am sorry! I did see the word size up on top, but maybe I'm wrong? But I like to think positive, it got me through everything before! But anyway, I believe, and hope, that this is great news my friend! Well I want to wish you a Happy New Year Sara! And I hope your Christmas was a special one! This is a wonderful write! Great Work!!
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Russell Sivey
Date: 12/26/2013 6:49:00 AM
I guess by the title, if I was just paying attention, would show that this was bad news...I'm sorry about that my friend! If there is anything you need just let me know!

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