A Moment In Time

I watched an eagle

     its long wings curled up at the tips

        soaring high on the thermals.

             Then it was gone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Inyoureyes Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 9:34 AM
Nice..
Jackson Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 4:00 PM
Birds of prey are beautiful but are persecuted. I have seen an eagle nearby and all nature should be protected. Best wishes Linda
Halliday Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 5:03 PM
Nice piece. Thanks for commenting on my site.
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 11:41 AM
you could form this one into five lines and let it be a tanka. Just a thought, since you presented it in form "I don't know." It would make a good tanka.
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