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A Moment In Time

I watched an eagle its long wings curled up at the tips soaring high on the thermals. Then it was gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/10/2014 9:34:00 AM
Nice..
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Linda Jackson
Date: 8/16/2014 4:00:00 PM
Birds of prey are beautiful but are persecuted. I have seen an eagle nearby and all nature should be protected. Best wishes Linda
Date: 5/13/2014 5:03:00 PM
Nice piece. Thanks for commenting on my site.
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Date: 4/20/2014 11:41:00 AM
you could form this one into five lines and let it be a tanka. Just a thought, since you presented it in form "I don't know." It would make a good tanka.
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