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A Moment In Time

Where you and I sit side by side, Talking and laughing during this joy ride, Lost in the company of one another, Loving this time we have with each other, Everywhere we go we are always together, You and I will last forever, Inseparable just like bread and butter, I would always protect you like a brother, Although I am not a king and you are not my queen, I would treat you with nothing less then royalty.

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Bhavna Khemlani

Date: 4/13/2014 3:46:00 AM

true and nice - one of those moments one wants to treat someone with royalty and not let he/she ever go, congrats best wishes, Bhavna

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2014 9:38:00 PM

Jose ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/7/2014 5:46:00 AM

A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week , jose

Upeksha Perera

Date: 4/6/2014 11:17:00 PM

This is very nice :D I like it

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/27/2014 11:26:00 AM

Your first poem and it is so nice. I enjoyed reading very much Thanks for sharing and welcome to Poetry Soup... Lucilla

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/25/2014 2:43:00 PM

I like this, and this is how I expect my man to treat me... Jose, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2014 6:01:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jose :) - I choose your first good written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 3/24/2014 12:48:00 AM

Lovely ending, Jose, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT