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A Moment Before the Kiss

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"A Moment Before the Kiss" vision distorts the shadows blend hypnotic entrance eyes close the darkness next level up transforms golden as the eyes open channels switch tongues not used for talking words no longer necessary we walk through the door to a place of mystery elemental closed until that singular moment (LadyLabyrinth / 2023)

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Robert Lindley

Date: 5/29/2023 3:56:00 PM

I Remember A Princess That I Let Get Away---- I saw her eyes and I just knew She was mine until the ending of time We made it that summer evolving through A romance died, man what a damn crime. The world was a fine opera for us She with lips so sweet and body so fine I a bit of a rascal, a true cuss Passionate wine and dear hours we both dine.

Robert Lindley
Date: 5/29/2023 4:00:00 PM

Yor poem inspired that memory, that lost treasure my dear friend. Inspired memory of her kisses and her beautiful laugh. A fav my friend..

Triny Xiang

Date: 5/15/2023 7:21:00 AM

A beautiful and haunting poem. Syncs with the depth of your title. Can't wait till that singular moment where all moments reside. But, then that's also when the struggles of life rest imho.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 5/15/2023 9:43:00 PM

true.

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 5/13/2023 5:54:00 PM

This Bitter Earth (On the Nature of Daylight)

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 5/13/2023 6:00:00 PM

https://youtu.be/eikE9rn07iM