A Modern Place

As the sun rises over the ocean
And breezes swirl the palms
My thoughts turn to when I was young
Not that long ago this island
Was a different kind of place
Now every inch is robed in condos
Gone is the quiet of solitude's grace
Gone is the simple gait
A new era has entered
Where life is a noisy honky tonk pace  

Written June 04, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Devnath  Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 8:36 AM
Beautiful past memory of peace and noisy of today. Loved and enjoyed. Always, bl
Sivey Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 7:27 AM
Ha ha, you must've entered a bar or something by the looks of this place, or what I have imagined especially by the words, "honky tonk pace" At least that is what I imagined my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome piece, such a delightful poem Sara! What a fun write, Great Work!!
Mohammed Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 6:24 PM
A fine write Sara,I like the imagery you painted here.
Jones Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 4:21 PM
Great job Sara....that's why I mostly stay home now...:-)
Jones Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 4:22 PM
We can borrow our memories though!!!!!
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 3:08 PM
good one. It is happening everywhere and it can't be stopped!!
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