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A Mistreated Heart

by Michael J Faloico

                                                     Before the tear hit the ground
                                                        the door had already shut..
                                                   As the letters were being formed
                                                the words hurt with deep painful cuts..
                                          You turned and walked away without thought..
                                     My heart crumbled in pieces, so many not caught..
                                    Now invisible cracks hold together mistreated heart..
                                   Eyes like windows see clearer for another fearful start..

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2011

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Cory Long Date: 8/15/2011 6:32:00 PM soup mail! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/11/2011 8:39:00 PM thankxx Michael.. feeling the luv and hugs too as u express your sympathy to us right now.. so very much appreciated luv.. great friends like u are my treasure in life ..and your Jersey Girl feels better already with this luv..outpour.. thankxxx my W.K. Login to Reply

Katherine Stella Date: 6/11/2011 9:16:00 AM I dont think I will ever get over the hurt that one has caused me but what a lesson I have learned great write mike so glad you found someone new I never leared my faith with mate until it was to late and confronted him on his own death bed yikes keep up the great writing enjoyed the read Login to Reply Michael J. Falotico Date: 6/11/2011 10:00:00 AM WOW, Katherine.. that is a story in itself...a lesson learned, but sometimes like with me you have to take the class over and over again till it sinks in..lol..But thats me...

James Foulk Date: 6/10/2011 6:38:00 PM a heart breaking write, there is an old story, you may of heard, when you lose a love one, because of a break up, then of it like this, it is like missing the bus, wait a little while and another will come along. My first marriage ended after 4 years, i was heart broken, thinking my life was over, then i met my wife, and we have been married 41 years now. You are a great poet, and when you write your true feelings come out, i found out it helps to write about it, like you have done. Login to Reply Michael J. Falotico Date: 6/11/2011 7:39:00 AM Exactly James...This was a past relationship and I am now married 14 years and still going.. Your words are very true and pretty much how things fell into place for me... thank you my friend....

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/10/2011 4:44:00 PM Relationships can be very painful..Good presentation of the topic..I hope not you or not at present in your life..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by for your comments are encouraging.Sara Login to Reply Michael J. Falotico Date: 6/11/2011 7:42:00 AM Yes Sara is all about rebounding and getting back in the game.. I find it easier to write on the past which in return makes me appreciate today a lot more.. Thank you for your constant caring and support...Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/10/2011 3:11:00 PM A brave new world of heart, Michael Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/10/2011 2:11:00 PM u are a brave soul to continue on in emotion after luv eludes .. and new luv enters ..so grandly.. feeling the pain and pleasure of this piece Michael with deep intensity luv.. those cracks of mistreated heart heal in time.. your Jersey Girl in deep thought mode luv.. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 6/10/2011 12:38:00 PM Lovely, sad write, Michael. Thanks for your kind words, but I was just writing about a colleague's kidney stones : ) Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 6/10/2011 10:56:00 AM Even with the fear we tend to start again.. Are you spying on me Mr. F?? A touching write I am sure many can relate to.. I am one of them.. Love it Michael.. Enjoy the game later Dr. M xoxo Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/10/2011 10:52:00 AM The first cut is the deepest, Michael. After the first loss of a love, others seem less hurtful. As you say so eloquently, your eyes are seeing clearer, taking account the danger associated with entering another relationship. Thanks also for your kind words. I just hate not returning comments, but I will do my best to catch up. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Zzzzz Zzzzz Date: 6/10/2011 10:50:00 AM I can feel the pain in the words. A very well-written piece, Michael. Regards, Robert. Login to Reply