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A balloon that has floated up and away; out of sight Out of mind. A popped balloon dropping to earth like a wet rag In ruins; punctured by the beak of a bird in flight Date written and posted: 08/05/2018

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Date: 8/6/2018 12:22:00 AM
Your poem is evocative of dreams that sadly burst and don't ever come true. Well done, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/6/2018 6:34:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line!

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