A Miraculous Journey

In a spaceship he traveled
On the moon he landed

Floating was exquisite
He couldn’t turn towards the exist

Ten days were all he had
To discover the moon’s sand

One day, a voice was heard somewhere near
Yet it wasn’t pretty clear

He closed his eyes
To focus and identify the voice’s lullaby

Slowly, it was so lucid
Engulfing him with words that were so placid

Every night he stood at the same spot
Where he heard the voice’s plot

Every night he thought deeply
To decipher the words he understood so feebly

Ten days passed
And it was time to go back to his homely land

He couldn’t wait to get an answer
To what he heard on the specific borders

Indeed it was a matter of time
When the answers were ready and sublime

For when he heard the justification
His life changed and his path became towards the righteous station
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Higgins Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 6:26 AM
A very nice journey my friend. The write is filled with righteouness.
Burton Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 8:38 PM
SO WHEN YOU GOIN WRITE SOME MORE, let your mind expand, over the horizon of words.
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December 11, 2008 at 9:11 PM
wow, you really have a way, a wonderful way to tell a story, and there is spiritual journeys as well, [SMILE]
Burton Avatar
December 11, 2008 at 7:38 PM
You never finished what you were saying about the astronaut, finish telling me.
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December 10, 2008 at 7:11 AM
Sounds like your talking about the prophet mahammed, hope i spelled it [soory if i didnt] may be wrong, i heard a women told him of his path, but anyway great and deep poem and thank you for sharing.
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