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A Miraculous Journey

In a spaceship he traveled On the moon he landed Floating was exquisite He couldn’t turn towards the exist Ten days were all he had To discover the moon’s sand One day, a voice was heard somewhere near Yet it wasn’t pretty clear He closed his eyes To focus and identify the voice’s lullaby Slowly, it was so lucid Engulfing him with words that were so placid Every night he stood at the same spot Where he heard the voice’s plot Every night he thought deeply To decipher the words he understood so feebly Ten days passed And it was time to go back to his homely land He couldn’t wait to get an answer To what he heard on the specific borders Indeed it was a matter of time When the answers were ready and sublime For when he heard the justification His life changed and his path became towards the righteous station

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/16/2008 6:26:00 AM
A very nice journey my friend. The write is filled with righteouness.
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Date: 12/14/2008 8:38:00 PM
SO WHEN YOU GOIN WRITE SOME MORE, let your mind expand, over the horizon of words.
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Date: 12/11/2008 9:11:00 PM
wow, you really have a way, a wonderful way to tell a story, and there is spiritual journeys as well, [SMILE]
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Date: 12/11/2008 7:38:00 PM
You never finished what you were saying about the astronaut, finish telling me.
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Date: 12/10/2008 7:11:00 AM
Sounds like your talking about the prophet mahammed, hope i spelled it [soory if i didnt] may be wrong, i heard a women told him of his path, but anyway great and deep poem and thank you for sharing.
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